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As a member of our team, you will:
What are the benefits of working at Daisy?
Our ethos is simple: the more you put in, the more you get out.
Achievements: Awarded a 2-Star accreditation by the Sunday Times Best Companies and voted the UK's Telecoms Company in 2023.
Benefits include: