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The provided job description contains relevant information but has significant issues with formatting, clarity, and focus. It appears to combine multiple roles and details that are not clearly distinguished, which can confuse potential applicants. To improve, the description should be reorganized to clearly separate the Fire Systems Delivery Specialist role from the Project Manager role, focusing solely on the relevant responsibilities, requirements, and benefits for each. Additionally, HTML tags should be used more effectively to enhance readability, such as proper headings, lists, and paragraph separation. Overall, it requires a substantial reorganization and editing to meet professional standards and clarity.