Senior Environmental Advisor

at; Perth; On-site; AUD 80,000 - 100,000; Full time

Job description

Final assessment of the job description

The job description is generally well-structured and informative, with appropriate use of HTML tags such as

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• to organize content. However, there are areas for improvement:
  1. Repetitive sections, especially the 'About CITIC Pacific Mining' part, which appears twice, should be consolidated to avoid redundancy.
  2. The section titled 'How do your skills match this job?' is duplicated and appears unrelated to the core job description; it should be removed or integrated more appropriately.
  3. Some content, like the mention of 'Researching careers?', is irrelevant and should be omitted.
  4. Minor typographical issues, such as missing spaces or inconsistent formatting, should be corrected for professionalism.

  In summary, the content is relevant and comprehensive but requires editing for conciseness, removal of duplicates, and improved focus. Therefore, a refinement is needed to enhance clarity and professionalism without altering the core information.